Holding On
By Ewan
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You’re holding tight
to the slippery rope.
Are you climbing,
up to the sunlight
above the clouds
where the uplands
used to be?
Are you descending,
down to Sheol,
via Purgatory,
across the Styx
to Albion?
Are you paralysed
with icy fear
or indecision
and the demon
of doubt?
You’re holding tight:
you could let go,
you might rise;
a balloon
on the
wind.
Or
you
might
fall
into
despair.
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Nicely done. Even the intro's
Nicely done. Even the intro's good, and I liked the way you used the pagination (or should that be layout?) to add to the effect of the words.
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Perfect question mark shaped
Perfect question mark shaped by your words, and style. Which will it be, sink or float? Decisions are like that, at the moment of choice, you're not sure which way it will go,'float like a ballon or sink like a stone' but you have to take a chance. Enjoyed this poem very much, well done.
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