Poetry Makes Nothing Happen
By Ewan
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“Poetry Makes Nothing Happen” *
a) Inside
something here
something there
something in the midnight air
c
u
r
behind the t
a
i
n THE BED
under
who puts these fancies in my head?
b) Outside
The sky is made of cinnabar gloom,
stained by smog and sunset.
I will wait to stand and stare
at the wonders of the moon.
The scuttle of three blinded mice
whispers the fate of the farmer’s wife
at the point of her own carving knife.
The cat calls,
calls for a mate,
will Tom come
before it’s too late?
Run, run, run, run.
The dog is sleeping,
the race is won.
c) Both sides
This is the poetry described by Auden:
I am in the throes of loading dice,
Writing lines: a( )verse to fate.
Making nothing happen.
Scribbling words, though it’s too late:
still in the throws of loaded dice,
choosing words
on the spin of a Karma Wheel.
*A quotation attributed to Auden. Some words missing.
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I can't explain why but I
I can't explain why but I love poetry like this. Deep and surreal to the extent that every single word makes me think what the hell's he on about? The more mysterious the better.
I've tried to write this sort of thing myself but it always comes out as utter rubbish.
So I admire you for this and I look forward to more.
Turlough
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"The sky is made of cinnabar
"The sky is made of cinnabar gloom,
stained by smog and sunset..."
Creatively written and thought provoking imagery. Very nicely done.
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very imaginative
I like Inside the most it's like ee cummings, very imaginative but don't tell the doctors someone puts ideas in your head.
Outside I find a bit odd perhaps meant so, but I don't think Tom will wait any longer than he has to. Both sides Ok.
It does give a poet much more freedom if the poem doesn't have to make sense, I would think?
Sorry I'm a bit late but I like your poem & Nolan
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