Redress
By Ewan
Sat, 24 Jan 2009
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Yes, I remember that dress:
slut nail red - the hair was another shade -
simple-cut, a scarlet mutation
of every woman's lbd.
You wore those patterned stockings
that tattooed spiders' webs on your legs.
So long - so very long – ago;
the day red-lettered when you made
casually clear a cruel intention
to depart a defunct marriage.
I stayed glued to the crazing patterns
you had woven around my broken heart.
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A sad tale but crafted into
Permalink Submitted by tamara on
A sad tale but crafted into a piece of art.Brilliant.
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I am shocked at you going
I am shocked at you going for such an obvious minx in the first place, Ewan!
Superb alliteration, I might use this one in a lesson!
J x
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Sharp and absolutely
Sharp and absolutely brilliant. I too love the alliteration.
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