Tessitura
By Ewan
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Bass
Here, the rustle of low blown leaves.
There the hum of distant traffic,
hear the woofer from an upstairs flat.
Baritone
Bruno barking from the park,
Ramona’s running feet on stairs,
honking horn of a waiting Uber.
Tenor
A bin van’s reverse warning,
the postman’s singing Wonderwall
a builder’s shouted ‘mornin’ all!’
Alto
Shop-shutters shirring up,
a speeding sports car dopplers by,
the morning mothers’ urgent hush.
Soprano
Birdsong bursts from bare-branched trees,
brakes screech in deep discord,
the sirens call, with the ship-wrecked on board.
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The sounds of the city, I can
The sounds of the city, I can hear it all.
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Great idea well-executed...
Great idea well-executed... particularly liked the builder's tenor, and the last stanza was really pretty
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A brilliant and inspiredl
A brilliant and inspiredl composition, Ewan. I am a keen crosswords solver and yet I'm baffled by that clue but never mind, the enjoyment derived from your poem more than compensates for my dimness.
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This is lovely!
This is lovely!
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You are a splendid vertuoso,
You are a splendid vertuoso, Ewan. Loved this.
Rich
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Wonderful variety of sounds
Wonderful variety of sounds recalled, nature, humans, machines. Makes it seem like it holds all the life of the city. Particularly liked the sound of the words, too, in these lines
"Shop-shutters shirring up,"
and
"Birdsong bursts from bare-branched trees"
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