I am

By Firebird

Tue, 12 Jan 2010
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12 comments
 

Swift,
like the wind;
I come for you.
Calm,
as the forest;
I speak to you.
Fierce,
as fire;
I fight for you.
Firm,
as a mountain;
I stand by you.
My Love.
For you;
I am.

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Comments

Submitted by Mangone on
Love it! Not sure that it is wise to reveal the whole poem in the teaser though... maybe keep a little back to serve as a reward for those who choose to click on it :o)

Submitted by kheldar on
Short and sweet it may be(much like myself - apart from the sweet) but this poem conveys a magnitude of emotions - great stuff!

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Submitted by shoe on
I clicked, and WAS rewarded,:~}}

 

Submitted by Firebird on
Thank you both so much. Really pleased you liked it. (and thanks for the advice Mangone....will edit the teaser :)

 

Submitted by Firebird on
Thank you , thank you Shoe x:)

 

Submitted by Mangone on
Nicely judged Firebird! The 6 comments are advert enough now anyway :O)

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I like this very much Firebird

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Beautiful and very 'zen' poem, Firebird! Love the repetition ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Firebird on
Thank you both so much...really appreciate you taking the time to read it and commenting. Means a lot to me :x

 

Submitted by flutterby-baby on
'Fierce as fire I fight for you' resonates. Passionate, a piece written from the heart, enjoyed the ebb and flow and rhythm of your writing. :)

Submitted by Firebird on
Thank you flutterby-baby x:)

 

Submitted by Firebird on
Thank you flutterby-baby x:)