Overworked

By fluffeu

Mon, 25 Oct 2010

4 comments

Drooping falling
Heavy head
To much chaos
Dropping dead

Eyelids closing
Neck awry
Tipping knocking
Calcify

He keeps talking
Babbles on
Droning buzzing
Dusk till dawn

And I'm drooping
My eyes close
Falling tipping
Swimming doze

Drooping falling
JUST SHUT UP
Pouring filling
Spilling cup

Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on Mon, 2010-10-25 21:29

Really like this, like the rhythm and word play through it, and the last line made me smile :)

Permalink Submitted by fluffeu on Mon, 2010-10-25 21:55

:D me too... i could just see it spilling - it had to be written... the sleep was spilling over onto my keyboard :D thanks for your yummy comment

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Tue, 2010-10-26 11:47

I've met a few people like that!

Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on Tue, 2010-10-26 13:30

I love the flow of words and the form that almost drops you to the end.