Summer daydream

By fluffeu

Tue, 14 Sep 2010
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Love you - with a love that's wrong
Love you and create a song
Fantasize about your touch
Your smile, your eyes, your voice, and such
Love you - a love indecent and rude
A backwards love, one-sided, crude
I have a life far from your own
And live it with a different tone
But you exist - a light, a taste
And while this love may be a waste
I revel in it, now and then
Distracted, day dream, with a pen
Love you - be that love untrue
I will not act, just think of you.

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Comments

Submitted by russiandoll on
Very nice, well done, definitely has a feel of summer and of a kind of romantic pragmatism, which is quite an unusual but welcome approach, in my opinion. The fourth last line - is that meant to be 'I revel in it...' rather than 'I revel it in...'?

 

Submitted by fluffeu on
yes! oops! :D

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Absolutely beautiful! I can really relate, especially to those last lines ;) Well done! Magic xxx

 

Submitted by fluffeu on
thank you :D

Submitted by RachelPatricia on
So good, this! Very much enjoyed :)