Dropped Kisses
By Foxy_StoneFox
Fri, 18 Sep 2015
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I leave you kisses everywhere,
littering them like trash-dropping them here and there.
My kisses become clutter in the day to day havoc that is your life,
and mirror the stars in the sky.
They shatter a devastating echo of combustible constellations.
My kisses are time bombs of passion... possibly poison.
I hope you pick each one up naked, and alone.
A fitting tease for denying me your lips.
Turning me into a pedestrian delivery service,
dropping kisses around a set schedule.
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This is really lovely and
This is really lovely and cleverly thought out. Could you sacrifice 'that is your life' as it turns the perspective too sharply and interrupts your song? See what you think, it works without it. Love the image of these kisses all over, cast off like dirty clothes, dancing sometimes, cockily, in stripped sunlight.
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