Thanks Barry
By ged-backland
Thu, 05 May 2011
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Thanks Barry
Her name was Lola
And she wasn’t a showgirl
She worked in credit control
In city electrical factors
She had yellow feathers in her hair –yes
But she told me to fuck off
When I asked her out
Thanks Barry
(And you’ve put me off Mandy’s for life)
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enjoyed the first bit, the
enjoyed the first bit, the second bit needs improving it hasn't the swing - perhaps a rhyme might help.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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