Ashes
By girlbear
Wed, 01 Jul 2009
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Walk with me and dance
On the ashes of this earth,
For mighty is the flame that wildly rages so,
And burning are the fears of a people long ago;
This is everybody's earth.
And the fire in the ashes
Warms the voices lost below -
Gone are not the secrets
Of long forgotten sorrow.
But the whispers in the wind
Echo hope that cannot fade;
Only drowning in the darkness,
Till again the fire is made.
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I dont think I really
I dont think I really understand what this is about, it could be a lot of things for just one feeling, I like it anyway :) K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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Well that explanation fits
Well that explanation fits in lovely!
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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As I read it, it made me
As I read it, it made me think of past relationships and past friendships. thanks for the great poem!
----Kuno-Chan----
----Kuno-Chan----
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