Dropped
By hadley
Mon, 06 Oct 2008
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A day gone is a day lost.
Lost and gone forever.
We cannot walk back
to that day, dropped
only a short week ago.
Pick it up,
dust it off,
and smile at our good fortune
as we pocket it, ready
for some more needful time.
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Surely we can, doesn't that
Surely we can, doesn't that day become a memory, if it was a good day then smile away whenever you think of it, if it was a bad day remember it and learn from the experience. You have the germ of a good poem here, just a slightly different viewpoint is needed. I hope you don't mind my reasoning. Good Luck. (-; Val
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