How It All keeps Its Rhythm
By HaiAnh
Wed, 02 Apr 2008
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First that Chicago click of heels, tap drip,
then the low, uncontrollable sigh as they sit,
skirts shoved up hastily, trousers slung to the floor,
a room of women, uncrossing themselves, thighs open
thongs pulled taut like catapults guarding each door -
which kindly hold their coats for them.
Even the seat has been warmed,
signs put up to warn them if a man will come
in unannounced to this party of girls pealing back
plastic, sliding their fingers up into Kimberley-Clark’s
toilet roll holder and tracing their hand along the edges,
like skimming a reel of Sellotape, before passing
the tissue parcel under the next cubicle
and thanking each other often.
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Excellent, clever. Liked it
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Excellent, clever. Liked it very much.
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I like 'thongs pulled taut
I like 'thongs pulled taut like catapults.' the last line is cool too
really like this haiannie.
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This poem explained
This poem explained something about what it is to be a woman, that I feel I have never been granted such a strong insight on before. I realise it's meant to be humorous, or at least I think so, but it's a clever and very honest poem and is confident enough to explore the contours of a kind of sense of vulnerability at a very basic level - sorry if that sounds a bit 'pseud' on my part.
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