Summer haikus

By HaiAnh

Sat, 26 Jul 2008
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the grass is teasing
the paddling pool has taken
its first victim, just

burdened with the weight
of an abandoned bird bath
the cherub’s backaches

Certificate U
Poem
Safety goggles must be worn at all times
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by CastlesInTheSky on
I really, really loved this. It was beautifull and I really got the feel of summer I have tried writing haikus, but found it too hard, because I always try to get too many words in. Sarah (http://www.abctales.com/user/castlesinthesky) xxx

--Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.

Submitted by Ewan on
It's great discipline though.

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