HAL 2104 and Dave.
By Hal 2104
Thu, 03 Mar 2016
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HAL (2104) and Dave.
My internal
OPTIMISM
Has been dashed, Dave,
While you've been out performing
MIRACLES
I've been left here all alone,
Singing out of
TIME
From everybody else.
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1 User voted this as great feedback
Not that hard it seems :) I
Permalink Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on
Not that hard it seems :) I like this, it provokes an emotional reaction with a nice economy of words. Welcome aboard.
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1 User voted this as great feedback
I like the melancholic voice,
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
I like the melancholic voice, floating alone for eternity...
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