Charlie and Eliza (Pt 2)
By _Hayley_
Fri, 08 Feb 2019
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wow, great right hand turn, I
wow, great right hand turn, I'm not really sure how Charlie knows she's bisexual and I found it very hard to believe his mum knew that right away from a palm reading. I guess if these things aren't simply either and or, then the shape of a finger or the curve a hand suggest one or other and not both. I guess.
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Went somewhere unexpected, a
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Went somewhere unexpected, a deeper exploration. Lots of great descriptions of bedrooms/houses/extensions of people's personalities, and lots of heart. I'd probably agree with the above comment, but it's a lovely, carefully crafted piece, lots of care & detail put into the characters
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