Best Friend
By HeatherFeather
Fri, 20 Mar 2009
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You are my friend
You are my best friend
You got lost
Along the wandering path
And I will go any distance
To see you again
Because I need you
And I miss you
You were there for me
And I for you
I am sorry I let you go
Now I am afraid
That its too late for you
To come back home
I miss our hours of madness
That always made us laugh
I miss the history lessons
With the ice-cream time machine
I miss all the times
That have been left behind
But most of all
I miss you
I miss my best friend
x~x Kahdai x~x Sasuke x~x
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'I miss the history
'I miss the history lessons
With the ice-cream time machine'
lovely phrasing,
perhaps a little punctuation would improve it?
J x
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Aaw!...mi tu! /me runs to
Aaw!...mi tu! /me runs to sasuke
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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