A Brief Encounter

By hedgehog1

Wed, 26 Jul 2017
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7 comments
 

The evening warm; your eyes meet mine

Your kiss, carnal, unexpected

Your sapling tree grew proud in my hand

How our sensuality rose

As an eel like grace consumed us; writhing

You swimming deep inside me,

  The moment holding us

Body to body, but, no time to share

Lubricious; I wanted to walk not run

To be filled to overflowing, satisfied

Sweat dripping, feeling everything, alive

With my eyes wide open, climaxed by you

Like waves crashing on the shore

Over and over and over again

Leaving you I'm in a purple haze

Saturated, but, never sated

Certificate 18
Poem
Erotica

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

just checking the image is copyright free and doesn't require a credit? 

 

Submitted by hedgehog1 on

Hello Insertponceyfre... 

The picture is from Pixabay free images. My apologies for not stating that on my submission.

Edward (hedgehog1)

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Thanks Edward, much appreciated!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

This is so beautifully sensual Edward.

Glad you didn't leave it too long before giving us more of your poetry to read. Very much enjoyed.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by hedgehog1 on

for such an encouraging review of "A Brief Encounter"

      I needed time out to address a long standing issue of alcohol dependence in my thirties and forties. I have written a number of poems to address this which I am still considering whether to put them in print. 

Edward

      

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Honestly Edward,

the people on abc tales are so understanding. I myself had an alcohol problem and would drink myself into oblivion, so I promise you're not the only one. I think it help to write down your feelings, in fact I'm actually in the process of writing a story about that exact subject, so be assured nobody on here will judge you...well I certainly won't anyway.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by hedgehog1 on

Your kind words are a great help for me. I will over the coming months decide whether I will post.

Edward