Blue Wisteria Conclusion
By hilary west
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Soon, all too soon, the holiday was coming to an end, but it had been so special for both of them. That night in the hotel garden, after embracing Melissa and kissing those full, pink lips, Ken plucked the trailing blue wisteria and placed it in Melissa's hair, not knowing he was placing it in her wig. It was such an expensive one made from real hair and it was impossible to distinguish it from the real thing.
Ken loved with a passion, nothing could stop that. Melissa loved passionately too, albeit she was celibate, but that's how they liked it. There was a purity and innocence in their love that could not be denied.
When they arrived back in the UK both were sad the holiday was over but their love would survive; there was no doubt about that. Daily phone calls and meetings followed, but Dr. Woodstock was disappointed not to see Melissa in the car park or on the tarmac. But maybe, he thought, it is good she is not coming to the hospital, she must be well; whatever was wrong with her must be cured.
The truth was Melissa had reverted to evening appointments and was going more often not less. The doctor had no idea. It wasn't until a morning break in the doctor's common room put paid to all that.
"I've got to tell somebody today the diagnosis is terminal," said Dr. Weston.
"Oh, that's a shame," said Dr. Woodstock, "a man or a woman?"
"A woman actually, she's only thirty, very pretty actually. I think I saw you talking to her in the waiting room one day."
"Oh no," said Dr. Woodstock, "not Melissa Hutton?"
"Yes, that's her, a terrible tragedy by all accounts."
Dr. Woodstock just folded up and had to be taken to a seat.
"Life is so unfair, I'm devastated. She's a wonderful woman."
"Yes, life's a bitch."
Dr. Woodstock remembered the holiday in Venice, Melissa's swansong, but he knew then he would be with her to the end.
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I like the way you finish
I like the way you finish leaving it to the imagination that they are able to face the last days together, fully sharing the time and the expectation. So bitter-sweet, but hopefully enriching. Rhiannon
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That took me totally by
That took me totally by surprise - nicely done, and I suppose it is a happy ending of sorts isn't it?
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Ah bitter sweet and a sad
Ah bitter sweet and a sad finale. A carefully concealed conclusion (and something of a twist). Nicely done. Paul
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I had no idea where this
I had no idea where this story was going Hilary, the ending took me by surprise too. I think it's wonderful how you gave Mellissa a chance to be happy before things ended sadly.
Well written emotional read.
Jenny.
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I did enjoy all three parts
I did enjoy all three parts of this. I enjoyed the romance of it, and was surprised and saddened by the twist when Melissa's illness is revealed. At least they found each other before the end, and hopefully Melissa can enjoy some of what is left of her life.
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