One Night Together
By Hourhouse
Sun, 01 Aug 2010
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8 comments
One night
Together
Lost in each other
Exchanging secrets
And fluids
And chocolate
Skin on skin
In timeless love
One soul
Two bodies
Entwined
Together
But when
We bathe
Separately
I share only
Milky scented water
Full of the memory
Of you
You wrap
In soft towels
But not my arms
Looking beautiful
In your warm fluffy barrier
We dress
And
Each
Delicious
Item
You
Put
On
Builds
Bricks
In
A
Barricade
Between us
Your makeup
Transforms you
Into a Goddess
Making you
Untouchable
I worship you
From afar
Your lips
Sucking and bitten
In passionate kisses
Now enrobed in lipstick
For a swift soft kiss
Then you are gone
And I remain
-
Alone
-
Devastated
by your departure
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absolutely beautiful. it's
Permalink Submitted by gingeresque on
absolutely beautiful. it's like looking into a mirror. you described exactly what i would want to write about.
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Absolutely beautiful! Really
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Absolutely beautiful! Really love the structure of this one too. Oh and a very warm welcome to ABCtales - I hope you enjoy your time here ;)
Magic xxx
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Really lovely, and well done
Really lovely, and well done on on poem of the day, much deserved, (I hope she came back! )
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This is a beautiful poem,
This is a beautiful poem, really love the sensuousness of it, everything feels tangible and touchable, achingly real and universal...
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