The Labyrinth

By Ikthys

Tue, 07 Sep 2010
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Amazing maze of love
Oh! how I get lost in you
Searching the labyrinth of my own heart.
The only assistance in sight is my own trail of blood.

What is love?
Is there no blueprint?
Is there no designer to question?

No man can reach
.............the end
(Not even David Bowie can sing through this tune)
How I long for a Being to
.............search for me

Where are You my love?

I endlessly search the moist dungeon for You
I always fail to look
.............up
Where You are always
Within reach
Nearby me
Here.

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Ikthys, What beautiful, romantic, sentiments, you certainly show alot of emotion in this poem. Enjoyed reading very much. I like David Bowie, aswell, especially his music. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Curse of 222 on
the raw emotion works well. i assume all the periods are meant to create spacing;they are a bit distracting, but it kind of works with the labyrinth idea. jason

jason

Submitted by Kahdai on
Really like the emotion & rythem in this poem, Kahdai

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