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Cherry

By Itane Vero

Sat, 12 Oct 2013
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6 comments
 

Drossy black. Pitch black. Bakelite black.

Night black. Autumn black. Horizon black.

Classic black. Attic black. Last curtain black.

Mute black. Dogmatic black. Distinct black.

Straw hat yellow. Heavenly blue. Apple red.

Hazy white. Slightly white. Open eyes white.

Caution white. Wavering white. Joky white.

Just white. Natural white. Childlike white.

Cheerful white. Radiant white. Pure white.

 

Certificate 12
Poem
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Bee on

This is really good.

Bee

Submitted by Itane Vero on

Thanks!

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

I like how the colours change and the differing shades. A good poem         Elsie

Submitted by Itane Vero on

Hi Elsie,

Thanks for the reply! Although I'm curious what the 'Pan' might be...

Itane

 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Itane - it's a signature line so it goes on any comment I make.  For me 'the Pan within' means inner wildness and being in touch with the inside of our thoughts, feelings and emotions. It is a communal thing.   Elsie

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

As abstract as Mondrian's Composition 10.