Doubt
By iwylie
Wed, 04 Apr 2018
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A ghost appeared in my bed one night
The moon hovering, pulsing, watching, white as can be
I met her eyes in a hollow trance
She whispered in my ear,
Her voice harmonising with the moan of wind
That I was special in this world
She played picture shows of things I didn’t understand
That this would give me guidance
That this was my time
She wrapped herself in my white sheets, like any decent ghost should
And disappeared into the darkness
The same darkness to which
I whispered
that she
had the wrong person
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Really atmospheric and
Really atmospheric and descriptive. I sense the scene.
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Love the ending. Get the
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Love the ending. Get the feeling there is much more to be mined from this.
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