To the Road My Tread
By JamesF
Tue, 08 Feb 2011
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To the road my tread
to the wind my face
and never to return
to this city I leave.
And yet, on this path
I feel desire twist
but never will I turn
and never will I miss
this bleak city
whose reality is
darkness, now
drifts from view.
Where bright lights
once shone enticingly,
the sodden streets
leak sadness, rivers
burst their banks,
flooding the land,
sinking the city
arrived at happily
in a life
now past,
now flooded
with memories.
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I certainly agree with Pia,
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I certainly agree with Pia, very haunting.
Jenny.
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ScoZen Hello James. I
ScoZen
Hello James.
I thought you were on your way to Glasgow?
Now your leaving,mmm, must have read the wrong story.
Regards
ScoZen
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Haunting images, but why is
Haunting images, but why is your punctuation so sporadic? Try punctuating as you would prose, the same rules apply.
Love the:
'I feel desire twist'
and:
'the sodden streets
leak sadness'
lines.
J x
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