Jewels

By Julian Robinson

Mon, 27 Jan 2014
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About us not me or you nor him

All together in this fleshly stew

Simmering stagnent with a pheasant hue

Of greens and browns and recorder sounds

And pillows and cases of feathers and curls

Make it our wish, our dreams come true.

 

About him not me nor you and him

But every scene your imagining

Of this darkling world, his shadowed grin

Behind his eye and mind so thin

Where in I feel a freezing teaze

When love was lost on this Christmas breeze.

 

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Comments

Submitted by jolono on

A big warm welcome to the site Julian. This is the first poem of yours that i've read and now I've just got to go and read the other two.

The language in this is rich and conveys so much feeling. Really enjoyed this.

 

Submitted by Julian Robinson on

Thank you jolono, the poem came to me as it was written with no changes while writing as if every word was already there. The other two, or indeed, the other one (I mistakenly typed it on the front page first) happened this way, too. The only change was the title because it first appeared as a poem in a letter I was writing to a friend, so its got two names rather than one! Thank you, again.

Julian Robinson