foolproof
By JupiterMoon
Mon, 09 Jan 2012
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foolproof
the bar has closed.
and three drinks
wait to be finished.
they have left the lights on just for me.
and they burn brighter
than i can take.
illuminating
the holes in my hopes.
even one-fifth of a smile
from you,
would give me enough thread
to begin a gentle repair.
let the broken
constellations,
burn one more time,
in my favour.
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"...illuminating the holes
"...illuminating the holes in my hopes..."
Nice one JM
ScoZen
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I echo the fantastic line
Permalink Submitted by leroy mockbee on
I echo the fantastic line ScoZen's highlighted and include 'even one-fifth of a smile'.
This is really good.
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