Defending to war (drafting, any advice?)

By Kahdai

Sat, 08 May 2010
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The (explosions) fliiyihng up in the air,
sounds like (massive crowds) cheering.
The (clatter) of destruction on the ground,
is heard as (something) applause.
now yu hir hou easili
defence of your world
can turn it all to war
& war can turn it all
(on to your world?)

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Comments

Submitted by WillSimpson on
The last bit sums up so many pointless debates about peace.

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Submitted by Kahdai on
Yes, it was going to be for the 'as ye sow I.P. ' I just get carried away with the war ideas & how some people feel they are hero for it! Thanks for reading Will.

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "