Hope enough (song)

By Kahdai

Sat, 19 Mar 2011

5 comments

You have no hope left in you
holding on made you run out,
yet I've only to look at you
and I don't need the sun out

I've got hope enough
for the both of us
and I'll hope for you,
one day to,
have enough hope to
wish on my stars too
and believe it can come true.

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Sat, 2011-03-19 12:35

There is a deceptive simplicity to this one, Kahdai, only adding to its appeal. I liked it, very much. Tina x

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Sat, 2011-03-19 13:37

Thanks Tina, you're right ;) x K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sat, 2011-03-19 17:07

A really beautiful poem here Kahdai, love the way you say, you have enough hope for the both of us, brilliant. Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Sun, 2011-03-20 23:56

And I've hope for the both of you too, Kahdai! Keep up the hoping ;) Magic xxx

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Mon, 2011-03-21 12:53

^^ Thankyou SundaysChild, Jenny and Magic thanks I will have to dont I? :) xxx K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "