November New-year (I.P.)
By Kahdai
Mon, 27 Jun 2011
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Darkest before the dawn
my sleeping october sky
losing clouds gaining a
one wishing star for me
tonight atleast, I have
to make myself sleep to
wake up to my new year.
The dew settles asleep,
a foxes paws out creep,
and the grey sky paints
with just a little blue
in hopes mine come true
this november new year,
I will wake better new.
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What a great poem of hope, I
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What a great poem of hope, I love it Kahdai.
Jenny.
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I like this to, for some
I like this to, for some reason 'a foxes paw creeps out' just completes the picture for me :)
Rebecca
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