Once upon a false-night sky
By Kahdai
Wed, 15 Sep 2010
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On a night like tonight, in this lonely city web
I-i want to ri-ide awey, into my own worlds sky,
where the sun is rising and the lights come on,
as I fly over hill I need to breath sing & sigh.
I wanto forget what made me cry
got no tears left, eyes are dry
yet one gift to myself is a lie
& I dont expect you to know why
So make your unicorn fly and laugh out loud at the day roll by, as long as you can fool yourself
I wanto feel free again, like last time
& in my head when I close my eyes,
I see my orange and green-clouded skies.
Know it not real, don't want to realize.
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Like the slight melancholy
Like the slight melancholy feel to this, and also the 'lonely city web'. Nice. :)
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Hi Kahdai, It's good to
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Hi Kahdai,
It's good to escape reality at times, helps keep you
sane, if you know what I mean.
Enjoyed this poem.
Jenny.
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' one gift to myself is a
' one gift to myself is a lie' I like these words. There is an air of illussion and desillussion at the world of today- 'this lonely city web. . '- yes very melancholy. a nice one- needs a bit of proof reading- spelling etc- keep on truckin' Kahdai
cheers
Pia ;)
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Nice one Kadhai, we all need
Nice one Kadhai, we all need to escape for a short while, now and then.
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