Tomorrow

By Kahdai

Sun, 05 Dec 2010

7 comments

Tomorrow, I will see
my best freind in
the whole world,
even though she
is in an alien
land to me, I
dare to go
explore.

With you
to show me
how to cloud-
navigate, I have
not worries about
stepping into your
new world, tomorrow.

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Sun, 2010-12-05 20:39

Love the structure of this one, Kahdai - it's like wings! 'cloud-navigate' is a wonderful word ;) Magic xxx

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Sun, 2010-12-05 20:45

Thanks Magic! Yes, I see wehn ii tilt my head! Cloud- navigating is a little nostalgia for my other magical freind ;) xxx K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Permalink Submitted by shoe on Mon, 2010-12-06 13:49

I hope you show your friend this poem, I would think they would be chuffed, :}}}

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Mon, 2010-12-06 15:58

This is beautifully written Kahdai. Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Mon, 2010-12-06 20:25

Thanks shoe and Jenny :) x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Fri, 2010-12-24 10:51

I agree,cloud-naviagte, amazing :) A beautiful poem. Beeme xx

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Fri, 2010-12-24 20:39

thank you Beeme dear :) xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "