Waterloo
By Katie1975
Fri, 18 May 2012
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You’ll be there,
On the other side;
Just across the water.
I think of you,
Sitting on the edge;
Waiting.
I want to reach out.
To connect.
We meet often
Only in my head.
I cannot bridge the gap.
I do not meet your eye.
Lost in the crowd,
Feel my feet rushing by.
Caught in the current
Swept away with the flow
Too ashamed
To slow.
You watch; invisible,
Unseen,
Drifting.
Resting on the pavement,
Falling through the cracks;
Dreams collapsed,
No way back,
Trapped.
I long to give my hand,
To understand.
Each time
I cry.
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I liked this tale of
I liked this tale of submerged love.
"...Caught in the current
Swept away with the flow..."
You never know, you may float to the other side.
ScoZen
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new katie1975 I enjoyed this
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new katie1975
I enjoyed this well expressed poem.
Stanza
Resting on the pavement,
Falling through the cracks;
Dreams collapsed,
No way back,
Trapped.
cavalcaderl julie
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Very good. Strongly
Very good. Strongly evocative of something, even though I'm not sure what.
Rob
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