The Eye

By kirsten

Sun, 21 Oct 2012
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The eyes are alert
Wide open, un-looking
white spaces haunting the dark green island.

The writhing red strings
Stay obvious and bright
Twisting around like snakes on the run.

The pupil hollow and
Never ending, hypnotically black
Like a night without stars.

The tears rolling down
Like a river but with no ambition,
Heart or life just sadness

The eyes are Alert
Wide open looking at the
Haunting image of eternity.

Certificate U
Poem
Opinion

Comments

Submitted by scratch on
I like that Kirsten. It's well written. I like the images especially the "river with no ambition" one. Good post.

 

Submitted by The Walrus on
Love your use of language in this one, Kirsten.