Twilight
By L G Meadows
Mon, 20 Jun 2011
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Day is ended
Night suspended
Twilight
I walk in the half light
A gentle breeze stirring
In the fronds of the palm trees
That are dark silhouettes
Against the lavender sky
Warm humid air
Clings to me, enfolds me
As if to hold me
Longer in its embrace
Preventing me from hurrying
Languidly I walk
With senses awakened
Sweet scents of blooms
And tang of salt spray
Uncoil in the air
Night sounds muffled
The hypnotic rhythm of katydids
The chirp of a lone bird
Perhaps to its lover
Saying I am here, here, here
And still I walk
Deeper into the coming night
But now, as one
With the twilight.
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Hello L G Meadows, a
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Hello L G Meadows,
a beautiful poem, I love the description:-
I walk in the half light
A gentle breeze stirring
in the fronds of the palm trees
That are dark silhouettes
Against the lavender sky
I could really imagine it, you wrote so descriptively.
Thankyou for the read.
Jenny.
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Ahh, LGM. What tales you
Ahh, LGM.
What tales you weave.
From your " Dragon Diminished" through to "Twilight"
and the ones in between.
Enjoyed them all.
ScoZen
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Hello LG Thank you, sorry a
Hello LG
Thank you, sorry a late response to your post.
I really don't know what to say, I'm going all red.
My work awesome? no one has said that before.
Gone all red again.
As a newbie, I am learning from others on ABCtales.
It's all their work that is awesome,not mine.
And I do appreciate your work.
ScoZen
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