Unruly Words

Cherry

By L G Meadows

Mon, 04 Apr 2011
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7 comments
 

I haven’t yet
WHACK!
Quite got it right
WHACK!
That word won’t fit
WHACK!
Puttin up a fight!

I know it should
BAM!
Go into place
BAM!
It needs encouragement
BAM!
And just the right space

I’ll get it yet
WHAM!
It’s gonna go
WHAM!
Just another
WHAM!
Minute you know

I’ll knock it in
BANG!
Almost there-
BANG!
and finish this poem
BANG!
For you to share

CRASH!!!!!!!!
Oh….. I broke it.
Never mind!

Certificate U
Poem
Words, silly
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by Geoffrey on
Reminds me of my boarding school!

Submitted by L G Meadows on
As long as it wasn't you they were beating into place!

 

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
haha this is great, very familiar :)

 

Submitted by L G Meadows on
Thanks... but familiar? In what way?

 

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
in a way it seems to replicate my mind when I'm working on a poem, not familiar as in unoriginal!

 

Submitted by L G Meadows on
Thanks for that, was worried I had inadvertently paraphrased some obscure poem I didn't know about. Also, thanks for taking the time to read it and comment!

 

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
no worries, it's a great piece!