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By BeamsAndVoids

Sun, 01 Jun 2008
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Your over-the-top love
ferments in my stomach
erodes innards
strips layers from my heart
and eventually spews out
gnaws at your thick skin
seeps in any crevice or orifice
until your varnished eyes fill up
and cry my acid

then you'll drown.

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Submitted by onemorething on
This is short and not very sweet, but works well. I liked 'cry my acid' and 'varnished eyes' especially.

 

Submitted by keleph on
lol, who's the lucky girl?

keleph

Submitted by BeamsAndVoids on
Thanks for the feedback doeslittle and keleph. Yeah it ain't sweet but it was my mood at the time. Girl? Lucky?