In my thoughts and in my dreams...
By leannebates
Mon, 15 Oct 2012
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In my thoughts and in my dreams
I'd walk with just the bumble bees
And floating leaves that wound the trees
The sun belonged to me.
Now in my thoughts and in my dreams
I rest with you, you know me best
We lay in grass as sun sets west
I have my head upon your chest
And I can feel your heart beat.
The silhouettes and shadows grew
We stayed until the morning dew
In my thoughts and in my dreams
I long for you to trust
That in my thoughts and in my dreams
The sun belongs to us.
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Really good Leanne, some
Really good Leanne, some great lines in this:
I rest with you, you know me best
We lay in grass as sun sets west
I have my head upon your chest
Lovely rhyming.
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This has a nice form and a
Permalink Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
This has a nice form and a good gentle rythm. I liked it a lot.
Linda
Linda
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Beautiful and dream-like.
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
Beautiful and dream-like. I'm a fan already, glad you joined the site!
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