Butterfly Hands
By Lem
Thu, 26 May 2011
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Our butterfly hands flutter palely in the gloom
As soft flesh gives beneath cool-sheened satin skin
Through the veil of self-control and thought
Shuddered tension to easeful breathing grants release
Backdrop low cries of fainting pleasure
Cascade-dance of harebell notes so sharp and sweet
You are all, you are nothing save solid warmth and light,
Soaring joy in your eyes lucid in sultry lapis skies.
Lips moving, I carve with my hands
From the darkness, marble shadow-outlines of you.
It seems we are mere children in this most adult art-
Sunshined, awe-eyed, forever bound in heart.
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Some great postings today
Some great postings today and this is one of them. A lovely piece.
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Hi Lem, there are so many
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Lem,
there are so many beautiful descriptive words in
this poem, I hardly no where to start, to say which
is my favourite. The poem as a whole, has so much
beauty.
Jenny.
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sonnet? is it a bit too
sonnet? is it a bit too short? lol, i'll have to look it up...
the last two lines are brilliant and so are the 7 & 8, they really do it for me.., ]
good poem
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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this is beautiful Lem -well
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is beautiful Lem -well done
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Beautiful and yet I found it
Permalink Submitted by V.C.Willow on
Beautiful and yet I found it sad also it seems almost haunting, only a fleeting pleasure that will fade. Congrats on the cherries
V.C
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Lem Enjoyed this romantic
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
Lem
Enjoyed this romantic poem.
And the title. Makes me think
of Butterfly kisses. Umm umm!
Images words
fall away of beauty.
Congrats; on the cherry to.
julie xx
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