Soar Angel
By Lemon Tarte
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It rose to tyrannise
Our views, industrialise
Our skies.
Its cold pale pillar
Pushed up like a sunless stem
Into the astonished air.
A gigantic pin in the map of our lives,
Resented.
Armed with three blades
Ready to cut down opposition,
Don Quixote's monster,
Waiting for challenge.
Then its arms began to turn,
Slowly, slowly,
Spinning light from dull air,
Warmth from icy gusts,
Sending sparking threads in a bright web,
And, quietly, without fuss,
Transformed itself into a sculpture.
Three-winged
Angel of the Soar.
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Not Convinced
This wonderful, figurative, delightfully proportioned poem has not changed my opinion about the aesthetics of wind turbines... Not quite. This is excellent poetry, congratulations on the award of a cherry and a warm welcome to ABCtales.
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I really enjoyed this windy
I really enjoyed this windy tale, a very visual read.
Look forward to more posts.
Regards.
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Love transformatory work like
Love transforming work like this. Your language use is precise and sharp. It feels like biting into a deep slice of zingy lemon! Hello and look forward to more of your poems.
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