Autumnal Reverie

By lenchenelf

Mon, 21 Mar 2005
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2 comments
 

Wrest it from the archives,
dusty memory,
she smiles,

Ah me,

those days,
those days.

That accidental, incidental
glissando from glance
to touch, to kiss;
to experimental instrumental
version of the Karma Sutra
on banjo and accordion.

She smiles;

Ah me.

Certificate PG
Poem
Infinity plus one
Love

Comments

Submitted by scratch on
Lena, I've been having a rummage in your basement - hope you don't mind. I was intrigued to see this title as your very first post and couldn't help being intrigued as it title suggested an echo of your most recent and fabulous offering (congratulations again on POW). The theme a little different here but the superlative language and structure skills are on display in abundance. Was the cherry system only a distant dream when you posted this? Surely it is deserving; anyway have on from me instead! <8

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on
Scratch, you are very kind. This was my first posting on this site and written in a very different style, one I favour, but not popular :-) The cherry fairy didn't hit a couple of pieces from my other 2005 work until some years after posting. Different editor's, different tastes. C'est la vie. Thanks again and best wishes Lena xxx