Festival
By lenchenelf
Thu, 22 Jul 2010
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Well within St Swithin's meter,
drenched in mire, bog and mud;
we toast friendship, undercover,
tentage sagging in the flud.
Merriment, fayre, sweet Mystery play,
come join our roust and doughty flay
of pompous hides, and seek a day
when common man, sings common lay;
for all, a Round, of blood.
edit 30.7.10
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not bad for a doodle - the
not bad for a doodle - the sense of the festival is woven through this, nice stuff.
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I liked the mixture of style
I liked the mixture of style in such a short piece. And 'flud' is excellent.
Rob
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