Nimrod

By lenchenelf

Fri, 07 Oct 2011

3 comments

Share your words, butterflied, pinned;
labelled for science, exempt
from experience, of man.

Cries of, I Am, racket from turrets
inspired by soldiers of Fortune;

She

never plays fair.

Permalink Submitted by rjnewlyn on Sat, 2011-10-08 01:01

Excellent. Butterflied is a great adjective. Rob

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Sat, 2011-10-08 09:00

Wonderfully enigmatic, lena;-) Tina

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Sun, 2011-11-20 22:42

Thanks Rob & Tina, I didn't reply immediately as I was unsure of what to make of the piece myself; have decided it can stay :-) Thanks again. Lena xx