Red Kite

Cherry

By lenchenelf

Fri, 03 Jul 2015
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6 comments
 

Is that what the wind is?

 

Exhalations of sadness,

grief, and a final

 

'O well, I tried.'

 

Invisible, but for havoc

it wreaks
on the living?

Certificate U
Poem
Walled Garden
Philosophy

Comments

Submitted by Bee on

 

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

So much meaning in so few words. I liked it very much. Could I just ask, do you need to break it with the first question mark when it could read as one question. I'm only wondering - please tell me if I'm wrong.

Bee

Submitted by lenchenelf on

Good Q. :)  I hoped to draw attention to the title as well as the body of text:)

Best wishes

Lena xx

 

Submitted by Bee on

I thought there would be a reason.smiley

Bee

Submitted by love_writing on

Neatly done. A lot said in few words. I liked the 'O well I tried' line. 

love_writing

Submitted by lenchenelf on

Kind of you to read and comment. I had considered expanding the doodle, but thought to do so may set a glass boundary of image and meaning.

best wishes

Lena x