The Beast

By Lennie

Tue, 24 Aug 2010
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Moonlight feeds my everlasting hunger and the beast
within is released, transforming from a human
to a blood hungry monster with no compassion or control,
and yet I walk among them with my skin burning in sunlight
and they are all blissfully unaware of my presence.

Unfortunate souls out in the sweet night sky are haunted
with the memory of me and my work too afraid to close
their eyes and see my luscious thick brown fur,
blood stained teeth and beautiful fire red eyes.

I sing a sweet tune every night to declare my love for the moon
my harmonious howling tune is heard and feared throughout the land
because they all know that a monster has woken
and nothing short of silver will stop me.

Even monsters have nightmares mine is not of the people
or the silver or everlasting hunger for blood.
No, mine is never being able to touch my love in the sweet night sky.

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Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
I really love the ending! There are fabulous images in here, I really enjoyed! One of your best, I feel :) Brilliant x Beeme xx

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Submitted by Lennie on
Aw thanks Beeme really glad you enjoyed it and I agree I think this is my best yet XD thanks again x Lennie xx

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Submitted by shoe on
I agree with Beeme, here, beautiful unexpected ending.

 

Submitted by Lennie on
Thankyou shoe, really glad you liked it and the ending. Lennie

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Lennie I too agree with Beeme and shoe. But really like it. No, mine is never being able to touch my love in the sweet night sky. Don't forget I hear full moon and friday night 12,30 am Mars will look like a 2nd moon, worth watching, if your still up, and clear sky. Someone emailed, me nevr heard of, interesting though. cheers. julie xx

Submitted by Lennie on
Julie thankyou so much for your kind comment, there was and is a full moon tonigh and yesterday night I was sitting in my room glanced out of my window and saw it so bright. Interesting indeed I will try and see that I am also a photographer so it could make some good photos, thanks again! Lennie x

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Submitted by andrew-evans on
I really enjoyed this poem, particulary the ending. There is something quite enchanting about the moon.

 

Submitted by Lennie on
Thankyou Andrew I'm glad you enjoyed it, true the Moon is quite enchanting thanks again for the comment. Lennie

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