The dark days are coming

By Lennie

Thu, 16 Jul 2009
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The dark days are coming,
it’s time to run and hideaway.
Hide from all that is bad, all that hurts you,
hideaway now.

Those cowards that can't face the music,
why don’t you claim the honourable responsibility?
Because the dark days are coming and no one can predict what's coming.
So why don’t all you cowards grow a pair and fight the good fight and
face those dreaded demons.

Pardon me for being so rude, I don't mean to be
but in this day and age you've got to be strong to be heard.

Because the dark days are coming and no one can predict what's going to happen.

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Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
ha ha, you kept it in there then! It had a good effect, defiantly got your opinion over x Beeme

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme true but we can live one day at a time julie x

Submitted by Lennie on
Beeme: He he, Beeme u new i wudnt change it :) thanks for the comment. Lennie x Cavalcaderl: Thankyou for your comment, I agree with you, take one day at a time and tke it as it comes. look foward to reading some more of your work. Lennie

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Submitted by pinda on
"Because the dark days are coming and no one can predict what's going to happen." That's really true, we never know. Just out of curiosity is there a certain dark day you was reffering to or just in genral all bad occurances?. Brilliant work

Submitted by Lennie on
Hey Pinda thanks for the comment, errm I have had a few dark days which gave me some material for the poem n some is just general, so abit of both really. Thanks again for the comment. Lennie

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Lennie well age is immaterial all have bad and good times especially at moment hope your improving. But I'll go to fete instead couple friends, musical to. julie x cavalcader.

Submitted by Lennie on
Thankyou again for your kind comments, true we do all have good and bad times but that life i suppose, thanks again for the comments. Lennie x

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