My Getaway

By Lennie

Fri, 19 Feb 2010
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My Getaway is music, films, and endless gaming,
trying to leave all that is bad around me but
sometimes re-living those fond memories with my sweet
and Mr.Cash.
Wishing that I could live like them on the big screen.

My Getaway is my dreams,
living like a reble doing things that
I was too afraid to do in reality,
or just evening out those many bumpy parts of my life.

My Final Getaway will come when it's time but not yet,
no way will I be beaten yet because I'm gonna stop running
and re-live them memories, make the dreams a reality
and when my day comes well...
Requiescat in Pace Mr.Grigg.

Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by Lennie on
Leave a comment and i may improve this soon! Lennie

Lennie

Submitted by Chundar on
I can definatly sympathise with that.

Submitted by Lennie on
Thanks glad someone can :) Lennie

Lennie

Submitted by Beeme on
A new poem Lennie!:-D I was very excited to see this, I can symptahise too. My getaway is also my dreams, I'm sure its the same for many people. Beeme xx

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Submitted by Lennie on
Beeme my friend, thankyou for reading glad you enjoyed it and yeah im sure many other people's getaway are the same :). good hearing from you! Lennie :) x

Lennie

Submitted by andrew-evans on
I enjoyed this too, I liked the way you listed a few of your getaways, but I think this could be better if you didn't use the phrase my getaway at the start of each stanza

 

Submitted by Lennie on
Thankyou Andrew glad you liked it and I see your point I will perhaps re edit this and message it to you and see what you think. Lennie

Lennie