Skin and a Wart
By lilyallenfan
Tue, 25 Sep 2012
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I’m a sister
Annoying and small
Clever and witty
Having a ball
I have a brother
Tall not short
We’re stuck together
Like skin and a wart
In the same house
(Sadly forever)
Whatever happens
We are together
Time spent
Always fighting
Storming around
Thunder and lightning
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Good on the rhyme. I bet you
Good on the rhyme. I bet you and your brother have good times too! Nice poem Lillyallenfan. Well done.
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I too have a
Permalink Submitted by The Talisman on
I too have a brother
Sometimes he does fidget
We both have our differences
Like a dwarf and a midget
I liked your poem.
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This was nicely finished
Permalink Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
This was nicely finished off... :)
Mark Heathcote
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Hi there lily, hope you
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there lily,
hope you don't mind me calling you lily. You keep trying things out on paper, because you have a gift.
I loved the rhythm and rhyme in this piece, you did
well.
Very much enjoyed.
Jenny.
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