COMRADES
By Linda Wigzell Cress
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Sitting in quiet companionship
On a grassy cliff where flowers grow
And thoughts like restless winds fly free,
Gazing at the bay below.
Remembering what used to be -
Battles fought, and love songs sung,
When they were young.
Medals glint in springtime sun
Proclaiming deeds of derring-do;
Watching white clouds scudding by
Remembering the planes they flew
Elegant as swallows in azure sky,
But deadly as the birds of prey
Swooping, baying overhead.
Long ago and far away
Soft tears steal down each fine-lined face
Recalling comrades so long gone:
Neptune’s waves their resting place.
And as the shadows lengthen
Sweet Zephyr’s breeze begins to chill,
And they sigh to leave their memories
With the daffodils on the hill.
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Comments
A fine sensitive poem,
A fine sensitive poem, skilfully crafted, reminiscent of Rupert Brooke's "The Dead" and in the vein of the War Poets writing. Good read.
Luigi x
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A sad but thoughtful poem
A sad but thoughtful poem Linda.
You've captured the essence of lost loved ones perfectly, and the ending said it all.
Jenny.
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Some great rhyming with use
Some great rhyming with use of Greek mythology, your setting is fresh, Linda.
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