dawn to day

Cherry

By littleditty

Thu, 30 Jul 2020
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Liquid sliver rolling still

in flowered cups, champagne flutes

of stained glass, droplets globe topping

the bell cluster comfrey. Cold moon glow. 

When all should roll, all statues.

 

A dawn blue mist slow rising

to rays of warmth - a morning kiss

to roll a splash of beads in the birdsong,

an awakening to all sky bound

and breaking fast for butterfly and bee.

Certificate U
Poem
whimsy

Comments

Submitted by Di_Hard on

this is wonderful! It really does remind me of dawn, it's magic. The way you keep saying roll, but it doesn't, it is movement, a wheel waiting all the way to the last line, when suddenly it frees up with "butterfly and bee". Made me think of dew sleeping in the darkness then with the dawn, filling with light before rising into the sky

 

Submitted by littleditty on

thank you for telling me -cheers :)

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Dawn! Lovely! ~&&

 

Submitted by littleditty on

thank you Nolan for popping in. Cheers :)