To Happiness,
By littleditty
Wed, 08 Oct 2008
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Happiness, you swooped like a buzzard,
snitched her keg of skin and bones
and pinched between a laughing beak,
a dead rag doll. A hook, a heist,
and in a swipe, soaring upwards
to perch on the branch of a tree.
Ripped and shaken like a giggle
She is moved
to a chuckle, a chortle,
a crow.
Your curled beak cup digs deep
and she is captured
meat.
You are observed
feeding, filching a cop
of meaningless,
beaming – or that is her,
exhilarated;
she marvels as you cheat her
of misery
because surely you feel nothing;
functioning.
.
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Great! I especially liked
Permalink Submitted by queen beatle on
Great! I especially liked the bit "ripped and shaken like a giggle". I can't tell whether it's a happy or dark poem.
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They say that the old ones
Permalink Submitted by luigi_pagano on
They say that the old ones are the best, wee ditty.
Good poem full of imaginative lines and peppered with good alliterations - hook, heist, chuckle, chortle, crow etc. (I will let others find the rest).
Did I tell you I liked it? I did.
Luigi x
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