People of the Lie
By littleditty
Wed, 17 Feb 2010
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Although you loved him, you also reveled
in his humiliation, when his older surety
was ridiculed, his place in the world...a schism, irreparable.
You, a witness, unable to acknowledge
the pleasure in this administered damage,
instead admired his footsteps, your fledgling
predator to forever protect his greatest pretense.
However, from under those feathers of yours',
Swan and Peacock both have eyes of stone
and flashing infrequently is the pleasure you take
from what you never would condone
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Interesting one LittleD,
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Interesting one LittleD, lots of emotional contradictions Lxx
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'However, from under those
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'However, from under those feathers of yours',
Swan and Peacock both have eyes of stone'
- love these lines ld, well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
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I like this, it shows the
I like this, it shows the inner hypocrite we all harbour
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hi littleditty just want to
Permalink Submitted by prettyrose on
hi littleditty just want to say i love your username made me smile :)))) well done on your poem, interesting and well written :))))
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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